Very much to the point. Stated well. You have a knack for last line zingers.
I love your title;I’m fond of themes about liberty.
Your last two lines are just on point.
I also like the connection between your first four lines.
It drew my mind to the fact that there’s a link between mind and soul.
More or less like, harmony of the soul,tranquility of the mind 🙂 Nice!!
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