I have found and lost you
Among the years we once called love
Where memories lay your hand in mine
And mine upon your heart.
My decade gone with you in it
Along we played our parts
That silenced heart and mouth and mind
Which keeps us now apart.
My soul do yearn to seek in you
That once so tender touch
So forward barefoot follow in
Your barren land of love.
Oh wow!!!
…jewel once wrote & sang that innocence is never lost…speaking from experience…neither is love…the seed of a garden rose may whither & fade in the desert but eventually it becomes once again what it originally is, a rose of sharon blooming in wilde places! ^^~~~~ further up & further in (your poem is already taking root!)
Your comment is much appreciated dafreewhitewolfe
🙂
Very tender … The final stanza is memorable … Beautiful
Short and sweet I love it
Thank you for visiting and “liking” To Ad or not to Ad”. I liked your poema swell. It reminds me a little of my previous entry, “The Economics of Love”, also about love gone by.
I hope you have a better, longer lasting love in your future.
That’s really nice… Really touching.. 🙂
the last para leaves an impression in the reader’s mind. nice.
words that feel familiar….
I have thought them often…
you have made a sadness beautiful
Thank you
Take Care..
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ladyblue
such a haunting whisper I had to read once more..and I am sure I will read again
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thanx for the comment
fabulous words 🙂
Thank you. Love your blog
Pleasure to hear the words 🙂
Very nice, “barren land of love”.
Hey, I like your verse (literally and technologically). Thanks for reading my work.
My pleasure
Very lovely poem . I understand that you stopped by. We are really two quite alike persons with much of romantic themes in our poetry. Nice to meet You . love Kerstin
Not only a nice subject, but very professionally written too
Thank you for the compliment
The only sticking point for me was ‘my soul do yearn”. I had to re-read it twice and wondered if the tense was correct. I only pointed it out because I enjoyed it so much! The last stanza especially.
Thanx u
very nice, thank you for visiting my blog 🙂
Pleasure
“Where memories lay your hand in mine
And mine upon your heart.”
I like the connection there.
A very touching and quite lovely composition of poetry! Beautiful.
Heart wrenching at the experiential level. I felt pulling sensation in my chest.
i like this very much – very powerful
Such a beautiful and poignant poem…triggers old memories and longings.
Beautiful poem. Thank you for the likes on my blog.
Thank you
passion filled beauty / nice to meet you
following you 🙂
best with your book
Thanx
Thank you
Your poem was very pretty, I did enjoy it, thank you for posting it.
ted
Thanx for liking
I enjoyed exploring your blog. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for following me.
My pleasure
love is the only thing that makes life worth living. why does it have to be so darn hard? thanks for liking my poem.
You can ask that question again!
Just beautiful!
This is truly a beautiful post, good work, thank you for posting it.
ted
im reading and cant stop
thanks so much
The pleasure is all mine
Lovely indeed! Thanks for stopping by my blog. I am so happy to be in this world of lovely poems. Thanks. 🙂
Rupesh
Thanx
Having enjoyed so many wonderful posts on your blog, I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award. Have a nice weekend. 🙂
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You have such a beautiful literary voice. The muse in us all begs for more!
Thanx Jay we all do have indeed
Nice work! I like your blog.
Thanx Todd
This is so beautiful. ..I love it. Thanks for checking out my haiku. I plan to look around a little. Blessitude!
this is nice…reminds me of…something…
Thank you JD
It reflects a relationship I was in throughout my 20’s. It really hit home.
Beautifully written!
You got some nice emotion it there, much enjoyed
Sometimes poems say it all! Thanks for visiting my blog!
m
Very beautiful and touching!
This is beautiful! ❤
Thanx Sharen
You’re welcome. 🙂
very beautiful and a well composed prose … a hint of resignation lamenting through the verse yet seeking a bit of hope … i really enjoyed it. If you do not mind I will reblog this.
Reblogged this on The World of Momus and commented:
A very beautiful poem I came across on this blog. Please visit the blog to read more of similar work.
Hi, Thanks for stopping by! glad I found your blog, you have a lovely corner here!
I invite you to see more of my journal: https://ayeh1.wordpress.com/
Best wishes, Ayeh.
Thank you will visit ur journal